Eternal Fate
by
by
Listen to their cries and pleas as they walk
The dark road.
You see there''s no peace where their going
Only fire and smoke.
They were given so many chances to rescue
Their unforgiven soul.
They chose to live a life without the
Holy Ghost.
You see this is the road to eternal death
Where my soul will never roam.
I gave my life to Christ to seal this sinful Soul.

19 September 2005
How true your poem is! Are you aware it's on twice?
Also, the word you want is "they're" in "there's no peace where their going."